Kaylee in Graffiti Easy Drawing of the Name Kaylee in Graffiti

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Chepter Member
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Took me some, but yes 2 pieces of my hand again:
on A1 paper - AFCA Hilversum

on A3 paper - Kièro
Grabs Senior Member
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Stoner pen freestyle

New Blame piece, got kinda lazy with the color scheme.
Looking for crits more on the Blame piece than the Stoner freestyle, but either is helpful.
The stoner piece is pretty sick. The blame piece not so much. You're getting ahead of yourself, the bends are random and the bars are lumpy. Id simplify it a lot and work on structure. Do more stuff with the simplicity of the stoner piece to work on structure and getting cleaner cause that one looks good.
Just some quick shit from earlier today. crits are chill.
Chepter Member
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2nd one made for a friend his kid (Kièro was the 1st post some msg before) - Kaylee
Grabs Senior Member
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@Vapik looking good homie, I'd work on the P though. The loop's proportions and overall shape doesn't really match the style.
@Chepter You're going for some old school funk and those letters are only really acceptable if you can rock them properly and at this point, I really don't think you can dude. On the other hand, you have a good grasp on color schemes which is good. Work on basic bars and boxes, don't get ahead of yourself.
Hoping to get some crits on this experimental piece. Should I finish it and continue with this style? Or leave this and work on a different style?
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maDUECE Senior Member
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Crits. Yes i know the throwie sucks badly.

@Vapik I still think the P needs to be bigger. Its way to small compared to the A.
Grabs Senior Member
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@Dreams The style looks nice and I'd continue with it, HOWEVER it looks a little forced. Work on just letting yourself go and trying to make things flow as your old letters did. You're on the right track dude, just don't force changes and extensions. Good work though.
@Wynk You're using boxes which is good, but your letters dont flow at all. The lean and way your letters behave just don't match each other. Work on flow, dont lean your letters in opposite directions if you dont have a good reasoning.
Zossqo Senior Member
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Tbh you give some of the most hypocritical crits ever dude, I think you need to do exactly what you've told chepter
Grabs Senior Member
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@Zossqo Im learning just like you are dude. I working to better my letters, I'm just giving crits to help kid's work.
On the real I gotta agree with zossqo on this one. While he might benifit from simlifying it a little, chepter really is pullin off that style quite nicely IMO.
@wynk yeah I agree completely. Haha I keep trying in every sketch to make it bigger, but it's hard because it either it has a long awkward stem with a small lobe, or if I make the lobe bigger too it creates a huge gap between it and the I. I found a way to pull it off though, I'll post later. Been trying to push towards a simple style with a lot of flava instead of the complex stuff Ive been trying
@mild yeah haha I know. Haha I need to find my laptop first, but I'll post the piece I did today, pulled it back ALOT. Also I have to disagree about chepter. Perhaps not so much in that one, but some of the others he's posted in the past have worked out pretty nice. And then even in the end if his crit was for the best, it was hypocritical, which makes it hard for anyone to listen too. No disrespect to any of you of course.
Oh yeah fasho. Haha this is fucking with me so bad I have no idea where it's at. If all else fails I'll post it from my phone upside down and gigantic.
@Mild and Grabs: Thanks for the crits. I know I can always post my stuff here and get Good, Honest Crits. I would hate to get false crits and think that my stuff is great when it aint.
So the main thing I'm trying to do at the moment is to develop my style with good letter endings. But I hear ya, some of them are too much, less is more.
Back to the drawing board it is
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Thx guys... that is why we are here. To learn. C'ments are always welcome (good or bad) as long as they are explained. So not in words like you suck etc, but told what is bad etc like the bars don't flow, of you letters are not in a same size, work on your 3d that kind of thing. So we know what to look after the next time. As you can see we all have our own taste. Grabs says I can't rock them properly atm, no hard feelings. Thx for the c'ment on the colors And Vapik thinks I doing well on this. (thnxs for the support).
@Mildstyles, due to this topic there are quitte some pieces I have made already. Not all the best, but as said before, that's why I am here
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@Vapik, at your last piece, the bar of the P is to long. Think it looked beter when you topped down the P bit more - quick draw to show what i mean
maDUECE Senior Member
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@Grabs I was trying to have the top of the letters lean into each other because of the 3d at the bottom. In the end it didn't flow at all though
@Mild yes I'm using bars. There was supposed to be only the two widths of bars but a couple of the skinny bars ended up fatter in the end. I'll stay away from pointy ends for awhile. It's a bad habit.

Thanks for the crust guys.